I agree with Maxvale's post. Some details are just TMI.
Basically, you have to ask yourself as a writer: is it really necessary to the story?
But, I can hear the chorus piping up: we're players, we're not writers. Why bother asking that question?
Putting aside completely the technical details of spelling, punctuation, and grammar as well as the more subjective elements of style in terms of sentence structure, vocabulary, and organization, play by post
would not be possible without
writing. The forum provides the platform but writing is still the vehicle by which we get anywhere.
And as players, we all have a part to play as drivers of that vehicle. As such, we do need to take some care in how we drive.
Unlike writing a novel (first draft of it, anyway), we really can't write *anything we want*, because it would inevitably bog down with derailments via diversions that are unnecessary/gratitous. Finding the balance of details and description that keep things interesting while also keeping the plot moving forward isn't easy.
For myself, writing Dmitri and Oksana's personal lives and how they interact with each other is a challenge I enjoy and sometimes also makes me tear my hair out. What to show? What to keep hidden? What can I imply?
Could I be more explicit? Sure, because the desire is there between the two characters. But should I WRITE it, even if I am up to the task?
No.
Though I might have gotten away with it in a movie from the 80s, where you could make book on the main man and main woman falling into bed by the third act--no, seriously, that expectation was catered to!--that was 40 years ago and since has become an outdated formula. I try not to fall into it when I write unless there's a compelling reason to. The reasons aren't that compelling on this venue. I'll just have to keep those scenes to myself.
Besides, the poor dears have earned a little privacy, no?
As for the OP's question? Speaking as a woman, I would like to think that by the time this story takes place, men and women can have a way to regulate their reproductive cycles through sterility on demand. Say ... an implant that delivers a pharmaceutical dose over a standard term of service (4 years? 5?), that does not inflict negative/permanent effects on the relevant organs and systems, and can be recharged if the Marine decides to re-up. While we're at it, make that thing a delivery vehicle for innoculations against disease, too.
If the universe of Aliens can hae PDTs, why not something similar to deliver necessary medical interventions, too? Hell, for all we know, the PDTs cover this job, too, but it was either too ubiquitous or universally understood to merit explicit mention in the source films and fiction.
Just my take on it.
